Today me and my Family went for a ride in the car we had fun I had fun I ate a browne my sis and my brother had nothing. When we went in the car my brother was crying for my browne my Mum asked him he said no I gave him a pes he was happy. When we got home we ate Pizza.
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This blog is a record of my learning while I was at Pt England School.
Great try on using full stops correctly - and well done on writing on the first day of the holidays!
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Yay for Maypo!
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