Howling all over New Zealand white capped waves came out of the water at the beach. Cyclone Lusi she is so strong and powerful. There were grey clouds that were loud and whistling winds all over the town. It was really wild weather.My next learning step in writing is using great vocabulary and a great story.
This blog is a record of my learning while I was at Pt England School.
Friday 21 March 2014
Cyclone Lusi
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Howling all over New Zealand white capped waves came out of the water at the beach. Cyclone Lusi she is so strong and powerful. There were grey clouds that were loud and whistling winds all over the town. It was really wild weather.My next learning step in writing is using great vocabulary and a great story.
Howling all over New Zealand white capped waves came out of the water at the beach. Cyclone Lusi she is so strong and powerful. There were grey clouds that were loud and whistling winds all over the town. It was really wild weather.My next learning step in writing is using great vocabulary and a great story.
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Hi Maypo,
ReplyDeleteI like your story about the Cyclone Lusi. I like how you started your story and the words that you used to start your sentences. I love the special words you put in your story to make it better.
Keep up the awesome work Maypo!!!
Bye
From:Jennifer!!!